Monday, February 28, 2011

Literary Pastiche

Post your pastiche here! Remember to bring a copy of your pastiche and the original 2 poems to our next class for group discussion!

11 comments:

  1. Listening to Goblins
    by
    Lisa Gulvin

    Day after day, night after night,
    Laura kept watch in vain,
    Listening to the MUSN’TS
    Of the grownups world,
    In sullen silence of exceeding pain.


    She listened to the DON’TS
    She listened to the SHOULDN’TS
    Never hearing the goblin cry,
    She chose to listen to the IMMPOSSIBLES;
    And missed their whispers, “Come by, come by”

    And never again as had always been
    As her hair grew thin with decay,
    Did these goblin men
    Hawk their fruits near the glen.
    So she grieved when they slipped away.

    Until one night a gentle taunt
    These creatures once more appeared.
    Against a fair full waxen moon
    To wash away her fear.
    And a whisper “Laura - listen close to me”-
    Anything can happen child
    Anything can be.

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  2. The Alone Jester
    by Vanessa Vargas

    From childhood’s hour the jester told a silly joke.
    I have not seen the jester sing a funny song.
    From the sun the Queen asked,
    As it passed me flying by,
    “Must it last so long?”
    The prince and the princess fell asleep from the same source.

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  3. The Edge of Loves Memories
    By Erica Buonacquista

    You say love is this, love is that:
    Well Columbus said that the world is round!
    Love has not even visited this country.
    Believe me I have been to the edge where the wild wind whirled,
    and peeked over the ledge where the blue smoke curls,
    and wind and the rain comb.
    Believe when I tell you, boys and girls,
    That love has not even visited this country.
    Just like Columbus was mistaken and said the world is round,
    The world is FLAT!
    Don’t you believe a word of that.

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  4. originally written by Shel Silverstain, re-written in the style of Charles Baudelaire. (References "Fountain of Blood", translated by Rachel Hadas)

    Thanksgiving dinner's sad and thankless-
    The turkey's sobs gnawing deeply at my mind.
    When I try to eat it,
    The gruesome thought I cannot leave behind.

    From Easter dinner's point of view,
    The feast runs with scarlet rills of slaughter.
    In the chicken, duck, and goose,
    All I see are festering wounds.

    I once loved pork and tuna salad,
    But now my mind and eyes are flooded
    With sorrow, now that I've discovered,
    Nothing in nature remains unblooded.

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  5. Amrita Roopraman
    I will not engage in tug o’ war.

    I’d rather play at hug o’ war.

    Intertwining two shades

    Becoming one with the smooth purple sky

    Everyone giggles and rolls on the rug of this earth

    Passionate kisses leaving moods of love

    From a shade of gray to yellow to saffron

    The world becomes embraced in hugs

    And everyone grins,

    And everyone cuddles even with horned branches

    And everyone wins because the colors of the world become entwined,

    spoiling the natural color to two or more, for I think of you.

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  6. The “sick” woman I knew
    By Tameka Simon

    I knew a woman lovely in her bones
    Her name was Peggy Ann McKay
    in the mornings When small birds sighed,
    She would sigh back at them;
    and say "I cannot go to school today"
    everyday there was a new excuse "I have
    The measles and the mumps, A gash, a rash
    and purple bumps. My mouth is wet, my
    Throat is dry, I'm going blind in my right eye.
    My tonsils are as big as rocks, I've counted
    sixteen chicken pox

    Ah, when she moved,
    She moved more ways than one:
    The shapes a bright container can contain!
    Her leg is cut, her eyes are blue-
    She thinks it might be instamatic flu.
    She was the sickle; I, poor I, the rake,
    She cough and sneeze and gasp and choke,
    Her nose is cold, her toes are numb,


    Her full lips pursed, the errant note to seize;
    Her tongue is filling up my mouth,
    She played it quick, she played it light and loose;
    My eyes, they dazzled at her flowing knees;
    Her several parts could keep a pure repose,
    Or one hip quiver with a mobile nose
    (She moved in circles, and those circles moved.)
    Her neck is stiff, her voice is weak,
    She hardly whisper when she speaks.
    She thinks her hair is falling out.
    But when she found out it was Saturday
    All of her sickness went away
    And then she went out to play

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  7. Inspired by One-Inch Tall/ Departmental
    By Shel Silverstein/By Robert Frost

    Answer
    by Anthony Wallace

    If you were one-inch tall, you’d stand in awe
    As an ant on a table cloth, bumps into a dormant moth
    The tear drop of the crying ant could be your swimming pool
    The dormant moth was many times its size and would be double that of yours
    If you were one-inch tall
    The ant was not the least distraught, as he turned to go about his business
    Not a touch, nor scrape, nor bump
    The ant went off on its duty, you wonder how long it would take for you to reach the store
    A month or maybe more, the ant could trek beneath the door within five seconds or less
    Would you use the ant for transportation, or maybe live in its hive
    You’d soon find you could do this an more
    If you were one-inch tall
    You could swing upon the antenna atop its head
    Use the dirt mounds as your bed
    However, you would be shocked to see, the ants purpose of being
    Whose search is to find God, the workers scurry to find the nature of time and space
    You’d come to realize living with the ants would lead you to an answer as to why
    I’m just one-inch tall

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  8. Michael Rodriguez Sonnet 4 Shakespeare
    March 6, 2011 Smart
    Pastiche
    Children’s Literature

    Sonnetically Smart
    My dad gave me one dollar bill dost thou spend
    And I swapped it for two shiny quarters, beauty’s legacy
    And then I took the quarters
    And traded them to Lou
    Dost thou abuse?
    That three is more than two!
    Just then, along Nature calls thee to be gone
    And just ‘cause he can’t see beauty must be tombed with thee
    Four is more than three!
    And five is more than four lives th’ executor

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  9. Shakespeare & Silverstein:
    Sonnet 130/The Bagpipe Who Didn’t Say No

    My turtle’s “no’s” are nothing like my “no’s”;
    Bagpipes are far more loud than her voice’s pitch;
    If kilts be plaid, why then her shell is plain;
    If hairs be pipes, rosewood drones grow on her head.
    I have seen turtles shell’d, brown and scaled,
    But no such shells see I on her back;
    And in some sounds is there more delight
    Than in the “Aaooga” that from my turtle honks, brays, neighs.
    I love to squeeze her middle, yet well I know
    That other turtles have a far more pleasing kiss;
    I grant I never saw a turtle-goddess go;
    My turtle, when she rests, lies on the smooth and sandy shore:
    And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
    As any she belied with false compare.

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  10. “Thirsty Girl” By C.F. Doell
    From On Our Cisatlantic Shore
    (A mash of Silverstein’s Lazy Girl with Ferlinghetti’s poem 3 from A Coney Island of the Mind)

    The thirsty girl lazily waiting
    waits for a drink of the water
    from the swiss mountain tops
    with Yodelers yodeling their yodels
    and secret springs of “Poland”
    in bath tubs and plastic bottles
    and the snow melts
    or so I’ve heard about the Global warming
    and Al Gore’s movie
    but it’s inconvenient to recycle or go green
    and adulterated rivers flow down
    waiting streams
    waiting mouths opened
    cold refrigerators
    open supermarkets
    groceried livelihoods
    of fly-by-night parenting
    For no more time exists where just a little drink
    could be waiting for her at the CVS
    a Quik Chek or ATM stop is all
    mom could get up off the couch
    or I could keep lying here
    on this floor on my back
    and wait
    for God to cry.

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  11. Marilyn Corona
    April 5, 2011
    Dr. Dana Milstein

    The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost/ Where the Sidewalk Ends Shel Silverstein

    There is a place where the sidewalk ends
    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And before the street begins,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And there the grass grows soft and white,
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And there the sun burns crimson bright,
    And looked down one as far as I could
    And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
    To where it bent in the undergrowth.
    To cool in the peppermint wind.

    Then took the other, as just as fair,
    Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
    And having perhaps the better claim,
    And the dark street winds and bends.
    Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
    Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
    Though as for that the passing there
    Had worn them really about the same.

    And both that morning equally lay
    In leaves no step had trodden black.
    Oh, I kept the first for another day!
    And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
    For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
    The place where the sidewalk ends.
    Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
    I doubted if I should ever come back.

    I shall be telling this with a sigh
    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
    And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
    For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
    The place where the sidewalk ends.
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.

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